Die Writing

A moment

Posted in Uncategorized by erdaron on December 8, 2010


Based on a true story.

Right now

The door quietly swished shut. A river of people was flowing in all directions, swirling and streaming. The hum of the crowd was even and cheery. The day was windless, and the trees lining the parkway merely stood by, relaxed. Golden sunlight bathed everything in warmth and comfort. Thin clouds stretched out across the sky like a familiar shawl. It was that time of the day when the morning chill is just barely leaving, and the afternoon heat hasn’t quite come in yet. The air was fresh.

And just then, it happened. Everything and everyone inhaled together.

They held their breath just long enough.

Then exhaled in unison.

A simple.




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